Hola amigos, Some reactions and critics wanted for this new landing page.
https://www.kinderzauberer-kindergeburtstag.chevere.ec/
New Landingpage for a german friend
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Re: New Landingpage for a german friend
I like it.
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Re: New Landingpage for a german friend
Glad you like it... tnx KingSparta
Re: New Landingpage for a german friend
Hey bluesman,
Looks good. I like the video. The only thing I notice is that when viewed on mobile, the text with the transparent blue background that is on top/over the video blocks pretty much the entire video. It makes it more cluttered especially since there is a contact button, another text block "The best children's magician...." and the text in the video itself. I would consider removing it from over the video for mobiles or moving the text somewhere else. I think the video is eye catching but if you can't make out what is going on, then it loses the wow factor imho.
Looks good. I like the video. The only thing I notice is that when viewed on mobile, the text with the transparent blue background that is on top/over the video blocks pretty much the entire video. It makes it more cluttered especially since there is a contact button, another text block "The best children's magician...." and the text in the video itself. I would consider removing it from over the video for mobiles or moving the text somewhere else. I think the video is eye catching but if you can't make out what is going on, then it loses the wow factor imho.
Re: New Landingpage for a german friend
Looking good - not keen on the contact button on top of the video. It needs to more prominent and different colour - Crispy has a lovely little extension for such things. Otherwise looking good! Welldone!
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Re: New Landingpage for a german friend
Hi crispy... yes I must fix that, your'e right, and tnx for your nice commentscrispy68 wrote: ↑Mon Mar 13, 2023 3:43 am Hey bluesman,
Looks good. I like the video. The only thing I notice is that when viewed on mobile, the text with the transparent blue background that is on top/over the video blocks pretty much the entire video. It makes it more cluttered especially since there is a contact button, another text block "The best children's magician...." and the text in the video itself. I would consider removing it from over the video for mobiles or moving the text somewhere else. I think the video is eye catching but if you can't make out what is going on, then it loses the wow factor imho.
Re: New Landingpage for a german friend
Tnx for nice words zinc. Yes I must check that out. I agree, the contact button disappears in some modes...
Re: New Landingpage for a german friend
This is the extension:
http://www.wysiwygwebbuilder.com/forum/ ... hp?t=95307
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Re: New Landingpage for a german friend
Tnx zinc. Was just in for asking you, had a hard time finding it...zinc wrote: ↑Mon Mar 13, 2023 4:54 pmThis is the extension:
http://www.wysiwygwebbuilder.com/forum/ ... hp?t=95307
Re: New Landingpage for a german friend
Pleasure and Good luck!
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Re: New Landingpage for a german friend
Did some corrections/changes... but not fully as adviced 
but I feel a little better about it. Changed the color of the call to action (Contact) and made the text under the headline over video with less text so it doesnt cover so much in the mobile size. Will see how this works out.
One thing... Does someone know if there's a possibility to make the url not show with the domain prefix when it appears in Google search?
I' using the "Structured data" extension and wonder if you can change this appearance with it?
The reason is that my client have his business in Germany and I have published my site on and ecuadorian domain; https://www.kinderzauberer-kindergeburtstag.chevere.ec. So if I can change the url for a linked centence without the: chevere.ec?
I will post this question in another forum category to...
but I feel a little better about it. Changed the color of the call to action (Contact) and made the text under the headline over video with less text so it doesnt cover so much in the mobile size. Will see how this works out.One thing... Does someone know if there's a possibility to make the url not show with the domain prefix when it appears in Google search?
I' using the "Structured data" extension and wonder if you can change this appearance with it?
The reason is that my client have his business in Germany and I have published my site on and ecuadorian domain; https://www.kinderzauberer-kindergeburtstag.chevere.ec. So if I can change the url for a linked centence without the: chevere.ec?
I will post this question in another forum category to...